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'''Jig Starlight'''
 
'''Jig Starlight'''
 
* Genki girl genius! Loves thigh highs, colorful things, cute things, girly things, and science!
 
* Genki girl genius! Loves thigh highs, colorful things, cute things, girly things, and science!
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* This one's gonna be rough because every single design here has a lot of stuff I really like... Just at first glance:
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* Round 1 complete, awaiting round 2
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* A/B/C goggles are best
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* Either bare neck like E or open collar like A/D; C collar feels too restricted (though I can feel myself changing my mind even as I type this)
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* D can get away with bare shoulders but B can't for some reason; think it's because her neck is more open in B, plus her top is unzipped
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* Speaking of which, really really really don't like B's zipper top (C's zipper shorts are fine though)
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* C/E probably have the best "skirts," but B the worst
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* Jigsaw puzzle theme of D somehow actually works other than maybe her bracelets (since then they feel like shackles)
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* B's stockings also work but C's and E's don't; one's too simple, the other too nebulous
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* Alternating colors of A's stockings work as a concept, but not those colors specifically
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* Probably best to use one out of green and yellow but not both (it was my mandate to try both, didn't quite work out) since C and E have the best color balances by abandoning yellow
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* Really like C's big open boots for some reason, likewise with her big open gloves
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* E's shorts are cool and C's shorts pretty good, A/B/D not so much
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* Not sure what's up with the key theme in C/D and I don't know how I feel about it
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* B/C tops feel a little cluttered to me with all her stuff, but better to do that than go overly empty like A; E's top also works well with lots of contrasting complex patterns
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Revision as of 04:24, 9 July 2014

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Eris Kenos

  • The big bad approaches! Though she takes the form of an angel of light, she's not what she seems...
  • A and E are clear leaders to me with the imposing armor and noble-looking clothes, though B and D have their good points with the abstract patterns, constellation patterns, and giant ring thingy!
  • Round 1 complete, awaiting round 2. E is the winner for Eris; A will either be broken into pieces and go to the Imperial uniform or it'll be taken as-is for an alternate outfit for a certain character that won't even happen until the third game!











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Jig Starlight

  • Genki girl genius! Loves thigh highs, colorful things, cute things, girly things, and science!
  • Round 1 complete, awaiting round 2











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Mina ... modeling the standard Imperial Soldier uniform!

  • A covert ops specialist in the Empire! Like Lash and Faray, she has an excellent track record that gives her great autonomy. Unlike them, she chooses to wear a standard uniform.
  • Round 1 complete, awaiting round 2











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Minori Tsukimiya

  • The second strongest superhero! She can fight with lightning, fire, sports equipment... and candy, UFO summons, and ghost summons! Her high-level creativity makes her endearing enough that even the egocentric Cotelle respects her intelligence.
  • Round 1 complete, awaiting round 2











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Star

  • Based loosely on Kirby! Though she looks like a magic user and all-around adorable girl, she's actually a powerful physical fighter who can master any weapon! Out of Cotelle's superheroes, she's the fifth strongest. However, Celty acknowledges Star as a top-tier fighter who would have potential to surpass her if she didn't treat battle like a game. (Ardis: "Ah, I hear ya. It's just like with our Jelia... You had to practice your core skills, but understanding how to grow stronger would feel unnatural for someone who instantly grasps weapons." / Leaf: "That's the impression I got too. She knows her weapons completely, but still needs to refine mastery over her own body.")
  • I said to make her 5'6"-5'8", but Star seems a bit short to me... maybe this is just what happens when other characters are constantly 5'10"+. >_> Or maybe she missed the memo because I overemphasized the "childlike" factor (I only meant in personality, not appearance xD). Doesn't matter too much anyway for outfit sketches, I guess, since Astrid is also a bit off-scale and I think even Minori is a little short for what I meant.
  • Round 1 complete, awaiting round 2








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Tango Moonlight

  • Flamboyant and naive bard!
  • Round 2 complete, awaiting round 3










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Winter

  • The calm, confident, and (quietly) cheerful one of her sisters!
  • Round 1 complete, awaiting round 2
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