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[[File:Eris-r1.jpg|400px|thumb|left]]
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'''Eris Kenos'''
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* The big bad approaches! Though she takes the form of an angel of light, she's not what she seems...
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* A and E are clear leaders to me with the imposing armor and noble-looking clothes, though B and D have their good points with the abstract patterns, constellation patterns, and giant ring thingy!
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[[File:Jig-r1.jpg|400px|thumb|left]]
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'''Jig Starlight'''
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* Genki girl genius! Loves thigh highs, colorful things, cute things, girly things, and science!
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* This one's gonna be rough because every single design here has a lot of stuff I really like... Just at first glance:
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* A/B/C goggles are best
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* Either bare neck like E or open collar like A/D; C collar feels too restricted (though I can feel myself changing my mind even as I type this)
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* D can get away with bare shoulders but B can't for some reason; think it's because her neck is more open in B, plus her top is unzipped
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* Speaking of which, really really really don't like B's zipper top (C's zipper shorts are fine though)
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* C/E probably have the best "skirts," but B the worst
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* Jigsaw puzzle theme of D somehow actually works other than maybe her bracelets (since then they feel like shackles)
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* B's stockings also work but C's and E's don't; one's too simple, the other too nebulous
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* Alternating colors of A's stockings work as a concept, but not those colors specifically
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* Probably best to use one out of green and yellow but not both (it was my mandate to try both, didn't quite work out) since C and E have the best color balances by abandoning yellow
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* Really like C's big open boots for some reason, likewise with her big open gloves
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* E's shorts are cool and C's shorts pretty good, A/B/D not so much
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* Not sure what's up with the key theme in C/D and I don't know how I feel about it
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* B/C tops feel a little cluttered to me with all her stuff, but better to do that than go overly empty like A; E's top also works well with lots of contrasting complex patterns
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[[File:Uniform-r1.jpg|400px|thumb|left]]
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'''Mina ... modeling the standard Imperial Soldier uniform! '''
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* A covert ops specialist in the Empire! Like Lash and Faray, she has an excellent track record that gives her great autonomy. Unlike them, she chooses to wear a standard uniform.
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* Keeping nothing from E except maybe the armband
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* Almost surely going with A's skirt
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* No knee armor, probably no elbow armor
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* Puffed-out sleeve cuffs like A/C/D are good
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* Really feeling like I have to use armor just to distance this from real world military controversies (it was my idea to try out a modern style, but... there's a difference between conceptualizing it and seeing it...)
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* Eris' design A might actually be the best use of armor here
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[[File:Minori-r1.jpg|400px|thumb|left]]
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'''Minori Tsukimiya'''
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* The second strongest superhero! She can fight with lightning, fire, sports equipment... and candy, UFO summons, and ghost summons! Her high-level creativity makes her endearing enough that even the egocentric Cotelle respects her intelligence.
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* Round 1 complete, awaiting round 2
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[[File:Star-r1.jpg|400px|thumb|left]]
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'''Star'''
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* Based loosely on Kirby! Though she looks like a magic user and all-around adorable girl, she's actually a powerful physical fighter who can master any weapon! Out of Cotelle's superheroes, she's the fifth strongest. However, Celty (despite scoring a fairly quick victory against her) acknowledges Star as a top-tier fighter who would have potential to surpass her if she didn't treat battle like a game. (Ardis: "Ah, I hear ya. It's just like with our Jelia... You had to practice your core skills, but understanding how to grow stronger would feel unnatural for someone who instantly masters weapons." / Leaf: "That's the impression I got too. She knows her weapons completely, but still needs to refine her own body.")
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* Another one who's going to be super tough. B and C probably have the largest number of elements with a chance to go the distance into her final design, but A, D, and E all have their strong points as well!
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* Love the big, bold pink and gold of B's skirt
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* Love the overall girliness of C's dress, especially from the waist up
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* E's skirt is super cool because it's star-shaped instead of just star-patterned
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* I like all of her shoes except E, though with C I'd kind of worry about her looking too much like Jelia since her sandal laces and straps are the same (then again, it could be a good thing since Celty's party at first wonders if Star is a shapeshifter like Jelia when they see her using any weapon with ease)
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* Great ponytail for C, but avoid B/D/E hair styles at all costs
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* I said to make her 5'6"-5'8", but Star seems a bit short to me... maybe this is just what happens when other characters are constantly 5'10"+. >_> Or maybe she missed the memo because I overemphasized the "childlike" factor (I only meant in personality, not appearance xD). Doesn't matter too much anyway for outfit sketches, I guess, since Astrid is also a bit off-scale and I think even Minori is a little short for what I meant.
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* I love the cute positioning of her foot <3
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* A/C hair colors work out
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* Not a fan of tanktop straps showing in A
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* Design D isn't pink enough even though the enormous bow is cool
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[[File:tango-r2.jpg|400px|thumb|left]]
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'''Tango Moonlight'''
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* Flamboyant and naive bard! This round already finished, awaiting next...
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[[File:Winter-r1.jpg|400px|thumb|left]]
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'''Winter'''
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* The calm, confident, and (quietly) cheerful one of her sisters!
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Latest revision as of 13:48, 7 September 2015

Here in this fleeting, ethereal page, character designs appear as they're in progress and disappear as they're finished! Click for larger resolutions!

...whoops! All done with designs for now. ;P